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Hey,
I am not sure the clap, it sounds to strong and dry, I would picked up another sample for the clap, and to layer it with a 909 snare to give it punch, the lead it's kinda generic, but does the job, the intro is not very good, neither the build up, the structure itself sounds pretty basic, when the kinda break comes and you add another melodie, it sounds all gated, and like with cut offs, wich I dont liked.
In overall, you have nice ideas, but this needs alot of work, right now it sounds amateur, focus into do a better build up, structure, elements, background drums, also I noticed there is a total lack of pads, try to add moore melodies, swoosh Fx's, you have this fat lead playing the same all over the tune, and becomes pretty monotone, in the good side your kick sounds pretty strong, I would filter the hi freqs at the end of the sample, or would play with the enmvelope making it shorter so u get ride of that hissy sound, but that's only my personal taste, keep it up  .
Kopi =o.
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