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syntaxx
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Registered: Sep 2005
Location: downunder

[Acid] Syntax - Gave you what (Full 192) first track

Hey All,

Newbie producer here, this is my first time posting a track in this forum. The Production Studio has helped me alot in my quest to write some decent music, hopefully someone can give this a listen and give me some advice, as I still have a long ways to go and much to learn.

This is a hard acid/trance track inspired by a sound byte I pulled out of a movie.

Made with FLStudio6 + Vanguard.

Syntax - Gave you what

Cheers!
Syntax

Last edited by syntaxx on Mar-13-2006 at 11:54

Mar-13-2006 11:44 Australia

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iloop
one love.

Registered: Oct 2003
Location: smalltown BC

the intro seems a bit too long with not much new happening. The bassline needs some work in my opinion because it sounds a bit plain. Rythmic elements are nice and crisp which is good The progression and arrangements in this track dont move so it sounds static and plain. the break comes really unexpectedly so i recomend going back and smoothing out your transitions. It's all about builds in trance, and eventually bringing your audience to a trance-state, and right now this track doesnt do it for me...

Mar-13-2006 22:32 Canada

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thoughtlessjex
Yakkity Yak

Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina

The bassline seems a little muddy on the low end.

I like that sample. The reverse reverb makes it much better.

The buildup is really just kind of annoying, after a while.

You need more layers. Multiple layers are what make acid trance most fun, IMO.

The bassline is just a low grumble by this point. Try EQing it to make it more defined.

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