intro is too heavy mate, you should blend it in easier

sounds like a song for a fairground, very commercial

you should also add a driving kick to it also your percs are very dry add some filters and delay to them

actually the more i listen it actually could be a happy hardcore track, add a driving kick and speed this up to 170bpm and play it happy hardcore style

cheers

kane

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I really listen to a single comment, but it hit me like a bolt. It had already gone from 120 to 130 to 150. I went to 170ish, changed the bass synthesizer to a similar sound on a totally different instrument and lastly put some reverb and delay on the drums. It is much, much cooler thank you.