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Hey,
At first sight all sounds too dry with the drums and centered, the bass needs work also as someone else mentioned, I would use it without that low tone,.
I would sugesst you to play more with the panoramics and with the effects, to add more variation because right now the tune it is pretty hard to eat, also it needs too much more background drums, I only hear a basic drum set, kick, hats, etc.
In overall, for to have 2 months producing I can say you are in the path, it sounds really basic and amateur, but you have already the idea, the only thing you need it's more time, and to listen to alot of music, analize it, listen the structure, how they do the transitions, the build up, when they add crashes, what effects they use, etc etc etc.
Good luck  .
Kopi =o.
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