hehe... i have had the same problem with remixing songs so i haven't had time to my own thing's.. but i finally got with Ocean of Life.

i really like when the string come in about 4.10..
and the breath.. it sounds really cool.

could i get that sample?

ohh.. and it's a great track

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hey thx dbl, nice to see someone understands my situation

i'll send the file in the mail if u want? let me know...
cheers! Wim @ LW

hey anybody else wanna share his/her opinion with me?

thx for listening to those who have already

have a nice day, Wim @ LW

Im downloading now, Ill post my opinions when ive heard it!

hey that's fine transa

let me know what you think of it then!
cheers, Wim @ LW

hello m(_ _)m

it's a great track. i really like the string arrangements...gives it almost epic feel. =>

for some reason i could not download the mp3 completely (it stops at almost 3 minute mark) but i was able to listen to the streaming version...weird.

hey thx yia

hmm that's strange the download stopped... normally mp3.com lets you download the full track.
well maybe just a silly time out or something, but nothing to worry about

again, thx for your comment!
Wim @ LW

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starts of ok, the bassline needs more punch I think, good use of them samples nice pads at the 4:00 min mark that realy adds a lot of emotion and kicks the track off . The little back ground melody that starts at 7:20, them notes are off, it don't go with the rest off the mix.
keep up the goog work Lightworks

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thx peter

well, i've got comments from other people to cut on the bass volume/strength and now i get the opposite comment from you... kinda confusing
i'm glad you liked the melody, i've made a re-edited version that's got some different sounds, with the sound at the 7:20 mark cleared and some extra effects.

i'll post it when it's ready
cheers! Wim @ LW

Hey Wim,

I like the bassline and SFX, they are pretty neat... the clap is a little weak, i can hardly hear it...! The ride is maybe a tad too loud as well...

I like the synths,4 some reason it reminds me of the old WipeOut games, it would suit the sound track for them maybe... ??

Hmmm, they is quite a few small Sn. builds which dont lead to much... also, after every build, the bassline seems to change or get quiter... It mite just be me but thats wut it sounds like...

I love the strings in the breakdown, they are freking AWESOME!

Also, that vocal sample is freaky...

The lead b-up is pretty lame IMHO... its too small... too quite and too... empty...

But still, i like the melody... maybe it could have been beefed up abit and brought more to the front... but apart from that its gawd dayum awesome...

Definatly u're best track yet... and the best melody u've made yet, thats for sure

Out of 10... 7.4


[Dan]

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thd Dan

i simply loved those wipeout games (seruious speeds!), so i'll take it as a compliment
i'm working on some samples now at the moment to better suit the track, but it'll take some time... but i'll let you know

you think the buildup isn't nice, the way it fades away and then comes back in full force with the climax? hmm i thought i'd try something different which people might like
let me know what i should do different about the main melody to make it sound not that empty according to you

see you soon my friend! Wim @ LW

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