damn this is cool! .

very emotional break.

and the lead is cool, but i think it might be cutting.. or its just my headphones .

i think that after the break the track doesnt boom away if you know what i mean, it needs a "boom" to make it more effect full i think.
the bass is kinda standard . the acid lines are pretty cool

the second brake is more to my liking actually, dunno why .

the vocals feels kind of too funny after a while :s.

this track is great but i wouldnt call it your best track!

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dont think its cliping (it could be that its not mastered)
well. I dont want that "boom" take off! its more like a relax track! and.. I think not its my best work, but my second best :P hehe

really nice track again, ryan! i liked your past melodies and i like this one...opera singer sounds nice...give this track a lil extra...
everything sounds fine to me...so imo there's no need for further mixing/mastering, except that i have the impression that your hats are a but too loud...maybe it's just my headphones...

// Lars

Hey,
First of all, it is not opera, opera involves alot of Drama, scenery, costumes, etc, to use an academic singer it's called Bel Canto .
I like the uplifting mood of the tune, however the vocals dont do the job good for my taste, the color of the soprano sounds too muddy and into the background, when should be crispy and as a main melodie, and always keep making the same 4+.
Kopi =o.

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this is cool. I really like the opera singer. Oddly enough it reminds me of an old gothic band Bauhaus. The arp after that, and several of them, have this crisp, bubbly energy.

This is a cool trance. I am too new to give any sound tips, but I really enjoy the SONG.

kopi_luwak: U understand you opinion about the opera :P
got some ideas to change some parts? thanks, and remember its not a final =) very nice to hear that!



Majutsu: thanks!

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Originally posted by Rayan kopi_luwak: U understand you opinion about the opera :P got some ideas to change some parts? thanks, and remember its not a final =) very nice to hear that! Majutsu: thanks!

I dont got the picture lol ...
Kopi =o.

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Woww!! that was VERY bad English :P

Well. want I did meen was:

I understand what you did write about the "opera" part. but, I did ask if you got some ideas of what I could change about that lead thing. "when should be crispy and as a main melodie, and always keep making the same 4+." did you write. did not understand the 4+.

and shuld I call it "Ryan - Bridge (Bel Canto Version)" ?

thanks

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Originally posted by Rayan Woww!! that was VERY bad English :P Well. want I did meen was: I understand what you did write about the "opera" part. but, I did ask if you got some ideas of what I could change about that lead thing. "when should be crispy and as a main melodie, and always keep making the same 4+." did you write. did not understand the 4+. and shuld I call it "Ryan - Bridge (Bel Canto Version)" ? thanks

LOL, well for the vocals I would put some highs on it and compressor, that would give them that crispy sound, about bel canto version, there's not need, I assume it is a sample or a vsti so no need to put the bel caqnto thing at least u are featuring a real singer, otherwise there's not need imo .
Kopi =o.

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lol! I see what you meean now:P

consider it done!