ok, track starts of pretty interesting.
dont really like that sinus/square synth you, to bright. maybe if you lowered the volume just a tad so its more smooth on the ears

melody is nice, the pads work well to give the track a good sweeping sensation.

but when the song kicks in at 3.18 it falls apart..to much melody, drop a few notes in the lead and lower the volume. smoothen it out abit.

overall I dont think its that bad, could be something good, but Im not to fond of the synth. to much Nintendo.

take care,

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Originally posted by DJoel_Trance Kind a "summer is coming" feeling tune. Melodic trance. Feedback welcome. http://people.cc.jyu.fi/yhd/sportic..._spring_320.mp3

Moi!
Nice tune that you have done!
I dont agree with the guy that in 3minutes athat it was to much?
But could agree that mayby a little bit to much nintendo but somehow without would nt the tune be so dreamy and cool . You got something going on so keep it up the good work.

Cheer Snowave!

lol the nintendo thing is pretty cool. mario bros meets trance.

nice one mate!

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