i took the time and started working on a new track. i hope i'm gonna add a nice dark melody and finish it soon. maybe sent it out if i'll be happy with results.
anyway 'till than please take a listen and leave your comments.
Lovin how it starts off, awesome kick sample and bassline intro.
Now into the melody...pedal hi-hats are back in.....
This has a rumbling feeling like if it was played on the floor, it'd like conquer it lol.....do you get what I mean? Nice smooth break after......
@ End
The atmosphere doesn't seem to make harmony with one of the basslines during the break near the end, but I assume this is because the track isn't finished yet
Anywayz man sounds awesome, definetly something to blast on the speakers with
Keep it up.
eZ
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Apr-09-2006 13:28
mavve
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Gothemburg
nice track. I like the start to very energic but i feel you could add a sub base after a minute or so to give it even more energy, break is kinda upplifitng and melody is ok seems your not filling the headroom.
sweepy Strings are great , but i feel theres missing atmosphere here.
Great potential to the track Like those way out west kinda strings hehehehe . Keep it up and make this one a killer
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Apr-09-2006 14:12
dj alliance
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Scotland
Very energentic. Nice bass and kick line. Like the riff too, maybe you can develope that further mate when the break comes in.
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Apr-09-2006 14:26
soundrush
aka Charlie Brownz
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: In A Loop
nice one mate,
the kick is very good, pretty massive. you should weaken it a bit. hats and perc go well, clap is a little bit to weak.
i like the bassline, pretty nice sequence but its almost invisible. you need to make it a bit more present imo. also the kick overlaps it a bit.
the synth you introduce at 0.50 sounds quite boring and dated to me.
nice pads in the break mate, now you should come up with a nice lead to make the melody stronger and make it more memorable.
chheers, nik.
Apr-09-2006 14:44
djsphere
producer in training
Registered: Apr 2003
Location: bucharest
thx for the replys.
not sure i'm gonna keep that riff and i need to write a super melody to make this worth listening. i'll zoom into small tweaking/adjustmets (such as levels, eq, and so on) later.
again thanks for the feadback, if any of you has material to review just post the link and i'll be happy to return the favor.
