Hello....

I was thoroughly dissapointed with my pass tracks i put up here coz i havent gotten that much feedbacks.... atleast expecting some for this...

this is what i started today.... not much for now... but i think this melody is kinda ok.... if you guys like it, plz drop something here.. any synth I have to work with? anything... thanks alot...

http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...P23RO5MU4EJN7SY

to ease your pain brother..

kick sounds to hollow. there's a slight empty hall echo on it. take down some of the highs on it. or change sample.

rest of the beat is good. nice rythms that goes with the synths.

that LOWER 2 punch pluck-synth sounds like its juuuuust a bar or 2 too late.

melodies are alright, not much variations for a very long time, you only introduce the next synth at 2.45 and since you have introduced almost all the synths from the start it gets repetive.

sorry if I couldnt give you more direct comments on what to do with your track, but basically try to variate it more, have more break downs, alter your percussions more, play with some fx.

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by avengie
Hello....

I was thoroughly dissapointed with my pass tracks i put up here coz i havent gotten that much feedbacks.... atleast expecting some for this...

this is what i started today.... not much for now... but i think this melody is kinda ok.... if you guys like it, plz drop something here.. any synth I have to work with? anything... thanks alot...

...no idea if you been so dissapointed last time.

Akia