you know there's something called "release" on the delay? this is just too messy.. I'm a headphone-addict, and listening to this makes me sick.. WAY too much panning and delay.

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Yeah i know the delay and release on the melody needs sorting out...i'll have a look at it next week..i just knocked this up yesterday in the afternoon when i was bored - i might even change into an ambient remake yet..

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hello adm.

i hope you are well.

intro is a little standard imo. break - i love the sounds. piano is great. as is the plucking synth. very atmospheric.

kick is nice. mixing is good.

efx really jumped out of the mix nicely and give a 3d sound to the whole thing.

overall i think you could do with some more upfrontness on your percs - to give more power.

nothing else to complain about here - good job mate

rich

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Cheers Rich,yeah im always working on my percs to make them sound more powerful etc. - i'll get there

I listened to it on headphones last night and didnt think there was problems with the panning & delay as Alex stated - but i suppose its down to people's taste - this is just my style..

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What kind of headphones (& headphone amp) do you have?

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Im using a Canbridge Audio Amp & Technics headphones - although i dont really use the headphones - i like to listen to my monitors really loud (which are Morduant Short Floorstanders)

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I think you could add something more to give it more power/make it more interesting but otherwise is it really nice!


Takere!

Akia