Up until the bassline enters, it sounds very amateur and 'general midi-ish'.
Doesn't have that really full wide sound, ya know?
You do have some stunning transitional effects though. I think the overall sound needs some thickening. Percs are very ho-hum and need MUCH more presence and importance in the work. As is, they're relegated to a simply 'metronome' function. Tune needs somewhere to go. It doesn't really evolve...what we hear at the beginning is the same all the way through. Nothing redeems this tune. Every element, imo, could use work.

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