Hey there, this is a part of a track i made.. more like threw together, just want to know if you think i should keep working on it..
be honest know .

http://download.yousendit.com/EFE969242AEDBB2C

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Very chill! So yeas, keep working on it, its will be a perfect summer chill track!

Akia

heh thanks

its just something i threw together with some z3ta+ sounds :]

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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good

Hey,

Uhm yeah, it sounds still kinda empty.
Kick and bass are nice tho. Really dig em.
Some nice chilling ambient stuff during the break.
The lead melody is annoying to me

Anyway, good job, wouldnt mind getting to hear a full track of this

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nice bird fx in the beginning

the filtered bass sounds nice ! and the clap sounds good too just add a bit of reverb, nice percs!

wtf is with those birds man hhehe.. sweet pad !,.. break, melody sound is really cool!

you should throw in some hihats and stuff this could become a really nice track, keep working on it!

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hey buddy, listenin right now

likin the intro, nice ambient bird sounds hehe

good bassline to keep to things runnin smoothly

there's not too much here to critique yet, but I'd say you've got the makings of a pretty nice track here. i would consider tweaking that main synth though. but yes Def. keep working on this one!
Look forward to hearin a further along sample and the final cut!

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every body loves the birdys!

thanks for the nice qritique guys, i think as most of you hear its supposed to be short, i want to play this at the discos at my school i keep djing at .

i do think i should bring a second lead in after the 3:00 minute mark maybe.. but time will tell, right now im working on some dark psy though , thanks for the getting me started help cybernetika ;P

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

Hi,
Pretty nice bassline, allthough I think it's kind of empty around the drums. A bit to much trebble on that main-synth, maybe tweak it some more. Keep working on it, I hear potential. Nice ideas.

Keep it up!
//Dave

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