Quintet of a Meadow is my little pet tune. I need advice as to how I could improve it though. So any comment would be great. The link:

http://www.fileden.com/files/2967/E...el%20Mix%29.mp3

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Hallo!

Pretty nice intro! The melody is nice too but I think you need one more, and some breaks, its pretty repetitaive. You have to be more gently with the synth, sometimes its a bit noisy. I like the end, original! Keep it up!

Akia

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I'll struggle with the mixlevels. It's really har in this tune, because it almost literally contains an orchestra (of course it's samples and it's only strings, with pianos of course), but I'm working a lot with that atm. The rhodes piano (the ofbeat piano) is a bit loud, especially in the end of the intro before the sub bass kicks in. Maybe cause it gets a lot of headroom, with being it's probably the only instrument in the mid range freqs. The problem is of course that the volume really sinks when the sub bass starts, I'll have to work around that. And the strings themselves could be lowered a bit.

I don't think I'll add more melodies though, I like that as it is.

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Sebastian Zander - Hotel Chaplin
Sebastian Zander - Set Two [Electro/Tech House and Trance of some sort]
Paulo Da Costa - AVGN [Prog. House](128kbps])