hi guys.

here is my new production name. 'portasound convention'

still a bit of work to go in mixing etc but the track is near complete.

here!

any crit will be most helpful especially on how to clean the bass/kick area up! its not clean enough and i cant get it right


rich

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hey rich - listening - ur trademark kick and percussion are there hehe...really clean and a good groove - like the synth coming in and the stringy melody..quite sad sounding..like the bleepy effects in the background....not sure about the really high siney synth..nice buildup coming in with the piano..

really nice tune rich...maybe could with more powerful pads coming in at the end (i always say this)

adam

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Hey Rich!

Very nice track here, I just love the intro. The percussions are amazing
The kick has that "Richard Gale stamp" as usual
The second breakdown is great, and it's not a bad idea from adam about adding some big pads.

I've told you before what i think of it and I'm seing forward to the full version. It has to be nicey nicey
Great work so far!

//Alexander

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Really nice! I like the intro and the melodies a lot. Maybe you can do something more about the end. Otherwise, a good job!

Akia

Well done.... You always have this Unique Stuff in your tracks Like to hear the High Bitrate tho coz Myspace player is crappy in bitrate lol...

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Hey rich,
I'm listening now...
What a nice bass line melody
Very nice track rich really original.
I like the hihats , all the 80's synths
Nice stuff mate!

hey guys.

thanks for the reviews adam, alex, akia, avengie and klemsy:0)

im glad you all seem to enjoy it

i did try various synths for a powerful pad but i couldnt make it sound right... im gonna have to buy a nice korg 'm1' to continue the 'portasound' vibe.. and of course a nice virus or jp8000/nord.


any main complaints?

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Hey Rich,
like the intro with the percussion and the rising bass!
Well, the bass is cool but it demands imo a big frequency range, maybe eqing/thinning out the bass will help you...

Don´t really like the 80´s background synth (e.g. at 4:50 min)...

But I listened to your track a few times and it´s really cool! End comes a little bit abrupt.

Keep up the good work, i like your more melodic stuff!

Cheers mate,
S-Tune

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much more club oriented than your previous work;

sweet rythm and nice pads as always!!

cool bass ! thought that was a pad lol!!

that higher note lead makes the entire track a bit less energetic..

I think the track was better without it keep the plucky sounds with the bass..

that would be nice IMO ..

dont do that if your positive that your track is right

Keep it up richard!!!

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thanx mr 's' and takkra

cheers for the pointers

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cool chilled track, monster kick u got there.

love the whining synth u got go'n on around the 5min mark.
bassline very smooth, maybe a few more percussion elements could be added.
not a huge fan of the sound of the piano, but thats just taste.

cool work

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