Hey again. This is my first track so it is kinda repetitive and simple but i guess that's normal for a beginner. Anyway i'd like to hear your oppinion about it.

All comments apreciated!


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Last edited by djsphere on Sep-02-2007 at 08:32

Beginning is right to the point, kick and highats.
The track moves on after a while, easy to remix thats for sure.
I do find the bassline to be nice and clean and the levels are well balanced. To me thes strings could use a little bit of work they sound kind of dry. The Piano comes in and does it's job of making me stay and listen to the rest of the track or a "hook" as it is called.
I understand its still an early work as far as producing goes, but it has it's strong points. The break is nice and quiet. With very few sounds or atmospheric effects, although I do say I miss it, the track sounds good this way. You need little sounds and elements to keep the dancefloor from getting bored of repetition. Good track. Beef it up a bit and finish it up

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thanks kris!

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anyone else?

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ok dood, well clearly ure not all that beginner, theres no need to say ure a beginner just to get a wow from someone, ure only cheating ureself, sorry if i've offended you in saying that and you may very well be a beginner but it is certainly evident you have had some experience in producing.

the track is pretty good man, everythings very clean, percs are pretty decent, decent momentum to the track, doesn't sound repedative to me just a bit tame, could have a couple more elements in there to liven it up, but all in all decent track, melody a lil simple but works, keep it up man, would love to hear more from ya. i'll post somethin up here soon so you can reveiw me.


peace

thanks for listening RoKo.
i'd like to check out some of your work. just let me know when it's posted.

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i did some minor changes on the percussion and bassline.

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i must say, very impressive dude, considering you only started not a while ago, you must have a hidden talent in you

i see no reason why you shouldnt continue working and release something someday

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Yup, It's very impressing!
It sounds very clean and balanced! Great work!
It does'nt sound "n00bish" at all!

I totally agree with Kris Xperiment.

I like it, and is seing forward to your next tracks.

Keep it up!

//Alexander

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Nice start.
The bass works but I would make it much more driving.
It should be a bit louder.
I like the pads.
Nice plucked riff or is it a piano.
You should have more elements.
More percussion and more melodies.
The bass should have much lower end.

5/10
Omer.

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thanks for the comments.

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Originally posted by djsphere thanks for the comments.

np, what do u use?

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