Someone needs patience... Dark and nice atmosphere, really good piano, love the choir, an abrupt end you should work with that. Very chill and beautiful!

Akia

LOLOLOLOL Thanks akia .... i made this sometime back so i just wanted to keep the melody original


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hey man, patience is the key to succes typing as i listen, pads are nice but you need a bit more variation of sound. the bassline fits well.
the piano is cool. i dont like that pad thats suddenly introduced at 4:00. the track has potential but needs a lot of work. some kicks and stuff, try adding more fx's and master it a few effects. good luck with the update!

bidor

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very very nice avengie.

i agree with Akia; the ned is to abrubt. you havce some effects around :07; i really like them maybe you could stick them on the end and bring them up. i always like ending where i started so it might be worth playing with.

i'm not a big fan of using the piano. maybe use another instrument or synthesizer playing the same notes.

i also agree with bidor regarding the pads at 4:00 and using more effects.

extend it more, for sure.

finally, don't add percussion cos you'll ruin it. or most have version with percussion.

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Originally posted by Spacey Orange very very nice avengie. i agree with Akia; the ned is to abrubt. you havce some effects around :07; i really like them maybe you could stick them on the end and bring them up. i always like ending where i started so it might be worth playing with. i'm not a big fan of using the piano. maybe use another instrument or synthesizer playing the same notes. i also agree with bidor regarding the pads at 4:00 and using more effects. extend it more, for sure. finally, don't add percussion cos you'll ruin it. or most have version with percussion.

Bidor: man i will practice some patience .... right now im feelin like flyin... so nice... whatever, i will fix it man... thanks alot for the feedback... i will try hard. coz i am crying right now dont ask me why.... i miss ma mommy daddy and ma sister back in my country....

Spacey Orange: Thanks man .. i know i wont add any percussion for this track coz the tune is bautiful... but i will try a trance version if someone helps me with some stuff... i need a collab... but im too twisted right now to do anything right now....
(Just drank half a bottle of bacardi razz right ouuta bottle)

thanks eveyone who commented.. anyone interested in a collab for a trance version, PM me... thanks

Cheers all

what programs are you using and what are you computer's specs? i'm just thinking about fiddling with producing.

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The pads begin to dry and straight to the point, at least I would fade them in so you build the athmosphere .
The first two Chord grades are classic, later they get really cool, instead a reverse cymbal I would use a rolled up one, like the one you hear in the movies like tarararararararararararararRARARARARARARARARAA with a fade in and out, those ones are classic, the reversed one it sounds a bit out of the mood.
Good piano melodie, I am expected to listen to some Fx/Chill Out drums like rock samples with reverb and some Sequenced Fx drums with some automatization filters and that stuff would boost it up alot, trusth me, nice choral melodie at the break.
In overall, this tune has potential for to be a great chill out track, but right now it is to basic, to add some Fx and Sequenced drums as I have said before with auto filters, try to back up the chorla melodie with some fluty sound or shak, a cymbal roll instead the reverse cymbal, to build up better the athmosphere, mood on the intro, to play with the panoramics with rock samples with alot of reverb and a stereo delay, and above all, SOME DEEP KICKS! Deep kicks are basic to add that deep touch mate, some deep kick with alot of reverb every 4 or 8 patterns can make the diference, it's what gives that bum deep sound to chill out tunes.
Keep it up man, keep me updated .
Kopi =o.

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Spacey Orange: I use FL studio 5 with Couple VSTs Crystal, Pro53, Vanguard, Superwave ... Do you want the track? i made the piano melody with an arpaggio lowered down to minimum speed and little timing in mind so i wanted to get the piano like that.... well, mostly i get those melodies when im depressed so its very rare lol...

I use a gateway M675 Laptop with 3.00Ghz with HT... 1GB ram and a crappy sigmatel sound card... i cant add too many clones of vsts coz my soundcard is crappy and it makes the static noise.... do you want the flp tho? i only used stuff in fruity loops and crystel for effects for this track.... just let me know...

Kopi: Thanks for the detailed feedback... I will try doing my homework lolol thanks.... will keep you updated....

Cheers