|
Avengie...I like the piano sound, the choral sound, very swimming-esque. Reminds me of being under wtaer. I was very happy when the fat lead came in. I only have a few concerns:
Harmonically, going from Bb, G-, C, F ..........going to that C, the release tails of the choral really clash. I think the progression that you were going for may be with a C- instead, except I know how cliche it sounds. I think honestly that's the only thing that really tweaked my head a bit. The rest of it sounds pretty cool. Good atmosphere.
I don't know, I hope I don't sound out of line and I don't mean it in an offensive way. Anyone else share my sentiment about the C major chord?
___________________
Arudius
-----------
Composer/Producer
[email protected]
http://arudius.blogspot.com
|
so to me, it sounds good 
). Keep it up man!
