hey, i thought it was pretty good,it builds fairly well but you just need a serious break it sounds good though, good job man.

Yeah right now I feel the breakdown is nothing. I also think that the melody needs to change just to fit it all, but I've drawn blanks everytime I try something new. Any other suggestions? I'm more than open to listen.

yeah it happens sometimes man, im actually just learning also and i probably have a harder time than you do, but just keep fiddling around, it'll come to you, just dont stress yourself, its crazy you sound just like me talking to one of my buddies on aim, trying to figure out where to go next, i have hard times creating a good break sometimes, but your song sounds pretty good, a little progressive though, but just keep messing around. usually i create my break from the main melody, try playing with those main instruments that come in around 2:05. they sound like they'd be pretty sick. Also just listen to some other tunes may they be commercial or other beginners to see what they do, most of the time i listen to other peoples tunes instead of commercial tunes, helps alot more.

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Thanks for the input. I was going for a progressive type of feel btw I don't know why, but lately I've been diving into the prog/uplifting type of style. I'm really looking to incorporate a hard trance type of feel into it, but I totally went from that to what is there now so whatever. Thanks again. Anyone else?

nice tune m8

Im hearing space for an arp or two in there