hey josefine!
liked your previous work, so i'll give this a listen, aswell...

bass and kick needs some eq'ing, imo! bass sounds a bit muddy...needs a lil tweaking at the lows...
lovely mellow-work...
breaks is done nicely...that metallic synth is a bit too loud for my taste...could be a bit more into the mix...try decreasing the amp and maybe add some delay and reverb...
saw-pad needs some eq'ing too...i buries the other sounds too much...
same for the lead-synth...so the sublead would be more present...

maybe someone else could confirm my thoughts or deny them...everybody has different impressions on that topic and also everybody has a different amplifier, headphone and such...

hehe, sounds pretty much bad, but all in all i had a great time while listening... it's just some technical aspects which would make the track even better...

you've done a good job again...
keep it up, girl!

// Lars




ahhhh lol, edit: just realized that it was 96kbps! this is what the sound was all about...ok, guess my feedback turns out like shit now...
i wanna hear 320kbps!

Too bad you only are putting out low quality clips
But it's nice to hear something new from you

Listening ...

Nice melodies, and they blend toghether well.

Some synths sounds very cheap imo, you could work more on the synthprogramming.

The arrangement is nice, nothing too complain about here,

I would very much like too hear a higher quality clip, then people are able too help you more too...

Great work though, imo it sounds like it could be released.

Keep it up, seing forward to your next tracks!

//Alexander

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can't say very much about the technical parts of mixing since the quality of the clip is a bit to low for that.

I like the use of the background melodies, they give a good flow to the track so it doesn't feel dull and boring.
When everything breaks loose there's some nice energy in the track but it still feels a bit like you could cram even more energy into it without making it worse. For me it feels like a really nice buildup but then I get dissapointed when it comes to the climax part...


but overall it's some good work, keep it up!

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