distant sound. very nice kick. monotonous beat. like the first synth break. you build energy, but it's a little generic. don't like the first main synth at 1:16. your background effects are great there. nice breaks. kind of slow, a lot of editing and sound work and it will come together.

oooo dark.... the kick is great and the overall atmosphere is, dark and smoth but you might wana add some more perc/tribals. the tune is very monotone it gets a bit repetetive at the first buildup, Now the buildup is great and the chord progresion is great here, it feels like something big is about to happen but it doesent, wich is a bit dissapointing(personal opinion.), I feel the tune has got great potential but needs a few more changes.

keep up the good work - Mavve

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cheers for the comments guys...yeah i know what you mean it feels a little generic at th moment..going to add more variation and some tribal percs as mavve mentioned and mayba some speech samples

..i do feel this is the best melody ive created so far tho and im pretty happy with it..

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Any more comments guys?

You can now hear a slightly revised version on www.myspace.com/magdelayna (sound quality is not so good on that player, hehe)

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starts like a Ferry Corsten track, nice clap and fx.
dark atmosphere..way too much reverb on the bass. I was expecting some raw bassline....
I really like this "bubbles" fx.
weird lead and climax, but I kinda like the melody...heh
try to add some more percussions to make the track sound fuller. or even pads or strings. mm nice work overall.

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hey mate.

i must have missed this one..

nice kick. and good drive from the percs and clap.

synths are awsome!!!!! so dark and atmospheric! i love them

i think the clap ruins the sound a bit. maybe change it for another perc??

your arp'd bassy synth is making a good rolling drive. - reminicent of plastic boy! actually this reminds me of 'dahab'

what is your main synth? you do great things with it!

break - i love your vocal synth. very real sounding in an unreal way if you know what i mean..

i hate myspace streaming!!!!

oh i hear an armin sounding sound. this is bliss to my ears

superb main melody! this is the first track ive listened to in a long time that makes my spine tingle.

honestly this is your best by far. so nice so beautiful.

please can i have a link to the 320k of this mate. i always have time once in a while to enjoy the bliss of the magdelayna

keep it up boss

rich

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Cheers rich for the comments! Im quite fond of that clap y'know anyway,i'll PM you a link to a high quality version of this and my Nu-Nrg 'freefall' remake

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hey, listening..

damn myspace streaming, it stops occasionally.. occasionally every 30 seconds..

i like the theme of the track, its pretty minimal, yet melodic and deep, the break continues with some swirrling dreaming synths, which works pretty well..

* stop *

^myspace gave up..

i see you used Music 2000 before, that was truly an amazing program..

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Originally posted by Subtle hey, listening.. damn myspace streaming, it stops occasionally.. occasionally every 30 seconds.. i like the theme of the track, its pretty minimal, yet melodic and deep, the break continues with some swirrling dreaming synths, which works pretty well.. * stop * ^myspace gave up.. i see you used Music 2000 before, that was truly an amazing program..

cheers for the comments mate - yeah its about time they did something about that Myspace player!

Yeah music 2000 was quality - i used the '90 kick' in every single track lol - i made about 6 albums on that - i have a laugh listening back to them

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Hey guys...this is pretty much a finished version @ 160 kbps...

Magdelayna - Valentine Rain (original mix)

or here : www.myspace.com/magdelayna

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