headphones listen.

theres a bit of noise in the background when it starts (yep, I'm anal)

spookey intro, what is that tom sound that comes in, like a really uptuned kick -


not my style im affraid; I'll go into detail if you want.

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I like that intro, it has a really nice atmosphere! Nice stringed and melody too. But I think the melody been to repetitive after a while when its going on and on in the same way all through, needs some variation. However, its a nice track! Keep it up!

Akia

Rhythm of the hats in the intro sounds a bit akward on their own.

That's not a very good kick sample, sounds more like a tom drum. Needs something with more punch in the lower ends.

Beat is way too repetitive. Try adding some variations like adding layers of hats and breakbeats on top. As it is, it doesn't fit the rest of the synths at all (it's also way too fast). With slow and soothing synth lines, lower BPMs work much better. Higher tempos are only good if you've got alot going on.

Overall the track sounds very repetitive. Try adding some automation here and there. It would make everything sound alot better.

The rhythmic elements are all over the place. You need to coordinate them so they don't 'clash' as much as they do.

Some original sounds in there. Some others sound a bit 'default'. Try working on tweaking individual sounds. Unlike conventional music where you've got guitars that always sound like guitars and drums that always sound like drum, electronic is as much of a showcase of the instruments as it is of the way they are arranged.

Keep it up!

Thanks I appreciate the opinions I'll keep working on it.

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Yeah go into detail I need plenty of constructive criticism..

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