well, i think it's a bit too fast.
140bpm?
the short breaks are nice. i like your percussions. good for tech-trance. like your breakdown at 2:00
but imo its not really techy enough
there should be more breaks, more little fx, some kind of industrial sounds.
the melody you bring in the mainpart could vary a bit (not the notes, but some filtercurves etc.)
tech-trance does not mean = monotonous. ;-)
but nevertheless you could work on, on this remix

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ahh yeah i was considering little breaks here and there..but CPU was maxing out. Its at 142 bpm o_O..thanks for the reply =)

Can't say I remember what the original sounds like.

This is pretty good though. All the sounds fit right in there. No complaints here.

I was impressed! I thought it sounded great! I love your technique.

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