Hey your link is down buddy. Reupload and I'll give it a listen. Seems no one wants to help out new people.

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Originally posted by Lindo Hey your link is down buddy. Reupload and I'll give it a listen. Seems no one wants to help out new people.

okay the new link is http://data.mp3.de/download/557980/..._the_return.mp3

or alternativ http://www.mp3.de/deusmars

I like the melodies in The Return. The a simple but effective and I see what kind of message youre going for.. Your synths sound very tinny and thin - stack synths add add thickness and work on reverb use to add depth to the sounds. Also, work on balancing perc with synths. Your snare was a little louder than need be. Also, I would as a preference turn up the kick.

I can go on with hints so just ask if you need help with anything

Keep it up

Spence

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Originally posted by askspence68 I can go on with hints so just ask if you need help with anything

yes, you can. thanks for the hints and i try to improve my track.