hey dude not bad for a begginner!
Fairly progressive, maybe include a pad of somekind in the bulild to the breakdown.
Also include a change in bassline key aswell.
Will add depth to it and change the mood slightly.
However much better than I was to begin with !!!
Well done, you can only learn more and more!

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thanks for taking the time to listen really appreciate it, taking all your advice ... now to just finish the song ... which imo is the hardest thing!

cheers

try to play around with some effects too, will add ALOT to this track I reckon

cool, but yeah automation on cubase is not exactly fun... is there a way to automate vst, without have to to edit the automation ... ex.. clicking all those dam dots and fixing your errors....?

good effort..sounds nice on laptop speakers....decent sounds...add a few
efx and frills and you got yourself a decent tune mate...stick at it ...
good work.....

yeah, man. Real good job. I think your stuff is better than my stuff now. Keep up the good work.

great first time stab - i like the progressive attitude while still incorporating a little trancy side to it. If you keep at it youll continue gettin better - suggestions on my end: more variation on the simple progressive chord arps, more reverb on synth to add thickness and quality, pad like sounds and sub bass for background quality? thats a start on my end - you can check out a mix i just put up tonight Magic in the Club - you can see what im talking about with the variation and depth with verb on synths..

keep it up

Spence

thanks for the comments, yeah i just touch it up a bit more with your guys advice tho iam still figuring out this vst automation on cubase, but i think i got it! if you want to know what it sounds like just click on that same link.

cheers =)