Hey guys...this is my latest uplifting, energetic trancer i just finished today...im hoping to get some more support from DJ's with this one....have a listen and tell me what you think
Last edited by adam_rodriguez on Jul-22-2006 at 17:04
Jul-07-2006 11:14
linkmage
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Vilnius,Lithuania
Hi again
bassline for me is a bit to flanged..hat and snare don't fit for this style,I think this is reverb problem...maybe too much... ..nice harmony!mixing is to liquid for me.thans only my opinion.01:50 rhytm fits very well.03:19 trance trance trance.03:40 synth is'nt good...don't fit for that place...and where is your automation...that synth is too loud..04:34 bad bad ...everything is flowing..no clarity..and TOO much reverb again...Idea is superb,but need MUCH work here...
don't stop...one of the best your track-ideas...
I liked it....maybe we could talk a bit with instant messenger?
Jul-07-2006 11:24
optik
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: oxford
(continuing in my quest to review as many tunes as possible in an honest way to big up my myspace profile )
don't really like the bassline sound in the intro; it's just not the right sound - should be an easy fix.
bassdum is too loud (to up in the mix)
like the pads - sounding good.
percs are getting better - although your open hat doesn't sit too well.
gets a little messy for a few seconds around 2:12 - there is something wrong there musically.
the strange ep sound when it drops is wrong.
takes a long time to get to the real break - the break delayed sound is interesting - like it. $:36 almost works perfectly - why not bring it in earlier?
when it comes back in around 5 - it reaslly needs to come in a lot harder - where is the bassline? - answer not there cause you chose a really midrangey bass sound (thats one of the reasons I want it changed)
track has potential
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Jul-07-2006 11:36
adam_rodriguez
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Leeds,England
ok cheers for the comments guys!...i'll try and take them on board and improve it...to be honest when i play my own stuff really loud and im satisfyed with it all the way through,i tend to leave it (unless theres something wrong big style)
...my ears arnt as musically trained technically like some people on here..
..and i dont want my stuff to sound 'perfect' ....i like to have quite a raw sound focusing mostly on getting a good melody and taking u on a journey of some sort..
..nice harmony!mixing is to liquid for me.thans only my opinion.01:50 rhytm fits very well.03:19 trance trance trance.03:40 synth is'nt good...don't fit for that place...and where is your automation...that synth is too loud..04:34 bad bad ...everything is flowing..no clarity..and TOO much reverb again...Idea is superb,but need MUCH work here...
