hey mate sounds cool, but starts a bit weird... lol, cool synth at 0:16, i dont like that sizzling sound at the background... ow fuck i hear some synths from another song, cant remember wich one... 4:43 the 2 synths mixed up sounds weird but sounds kinda cool at the same time... i like the vocals but man this track drives you mad after listening it a few times.. the track sounds cool and has potential just a little bit more work. it sounds TO progressive imo... good job

Bidor

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i cant exactly specify what needs to be changed. the only things i would say to change is the length of the track, make it like 5/6 mins. and perhaps take out some vocal samples. i hope others could help you out as what to change exactly. it needs some finishing touches

ps give my track a listen its in my sig. thank you

Bidor

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