cheers for listening - it's a poor mix at the moment (I need to fix the bassline a lot) - it's got a little distortion thrown in for free as well(that bassdrum does peak too much)
it's the general level of complexity - I've been trying to produce simpler stuff, but this one has come out very complex and layered - just really wondering if it's too much and I should strip it down a bit?
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Jul-14-2006 15:37
optik
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there's a new version up (same link) with a much better mixed kick (lower in the mix) cause it was way too loud. you should be able to hear the bassline now
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Jul-14-2006 16:46
RickyM
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Sounds quite thin at the start, but once it gets going it sounds pretty cool, good work. Could do with a more thumping kick maybe.
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Jul-14-2006 17:00
optik
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Location: oxford
cheers ricky,
you're hearing from the start of the break onwards; I'll have to do some transition work from the intro to the break and I'll try and fatten it slightly.
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Jul-14-2006 17:30
DJ_Sea
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Registered: Apr 2006
Location: Central England
Yeah, good stuff. keep working on this! gonna be a goodun i think.
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Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
that kick needs more punch... too much lows. drowned the track a lil... the gate is right on the spot man, driven me into the state of trance already. but the breakdown is kinda lacking... no energy in it... load a harder boom fx with another atmospheric sweep there after the break... 1 octave higher than your main lead on supersaw... now, that's euphoria.
Jul-15-2006 03:11
optik
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Location: oxford
cheers leng =)
I think it's working on you kinda how I want it - not too euphoric, more a kinda mike foyle-esq build of elements till the drop
I'll definatly be improving the kick though- even though it's my least favourite task as I find it hard!
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Jul-15-2006 10:04
mysticalninja
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Registered: May 2005
Location: Los Angeles
Boost it 1-2dB should be fine. Can I ask what you made the bass with btw?