I got realllly bored and i figured why not make something that i usually dont make xP. Check it out and tell me what you think!..by the way the last vocal chorus part is a tad bit off..the whole freaking vocal timing is like >.< so i had a rough time messing with it.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...0C48DFF7C1D4C7C

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Interesting idea.

First of all, the vocals are way too loud. They take away too much attention from the other elements. The timing is a bit off at some points, as you say, but generally the vocals sound ok apart from the loudness. I particularly like those cuts/slices/chops..

The track seems to miss some low end as well. I didn't think you were going to use that electro sound in the beginning as the bassline throughout the whole track, to be perfectly honest. A complementary sub bass would have been nice..

Other than the above, I like what you've done, although I must say I still prefer the original

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yeah, at the beginning i had a sub bass which was a simple off beat bassline and it made the track fuller..but then my ears just kinda gave up and i was like to hell with it lol. And yes the track is missing a bit of low end..mostly due to the constant rendering of different EQ settings i was placing..i couldnt get a suitable range. Thanks for listening though!

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