hi guys

all done on Ableton - any feedback ne1 can offer would be great
http://www.thefaction.co.uk/audio/users/mark/
newtrack4rendered

still WIP

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anyone had a wee listen to this? if not cool but any feedback would be super cool if anyone has time

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Persequor - Midnight Saviour
Persequor - Midnight Saviour (Sean Tyas mix) Out soon on MPFS Records
Persequor - Bandito/Subby , Out now on Diverted Recordings
Persequor Shine On/Living It out now on MPFS Records
Factoria Abduction Persequor mix out soon on Diverted Recordings
Perseaquor Nombre out soon on Diverted


www.myspace.com/Persequor1

not really my style, but all of the sounds are really great...they sound very well made.

should be in here. will generate more repsonse.

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74

and you will also get more response if you reply to others tracks.

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ah yes... benassi style... but the bass ain't working for me. noting much for the 1st few mins. some changes in the progression would be nice... atm it seems looping over & over again. and the short break like 0:53 is all over the place... not that it's not good to listen to but too many of that seems to be a lil bit annoying... *sorry bout that* can't tell about the quality cuz i'm on headphone.

For myself,
I would slow it down 3-4 bpm.
Manipulate something even as simple as a low-pass filter on that synth that sounds the exact same right through the track on every up beat.
Try a Beat Repeat something; it really needs to change around more.
Just my opinion, I still apreciate all the effort that goes into making something like this.