when the beat kicks in its pretty solid.
when the melody comes in, u totally lose the kick/bassline behind it. Also sounds like u have that bassline/kick running through a stereo enhancer, taking that off or decreasing it would help out a lot, but again not sure if u are running it.
Another thing you could do is eq the melody/bassline/kick by themselves and having them getting along perfectly because it seems like the melody is hogging way to much space.
melody is nice but just not catchy enough for me.
Besides those issues, its a pretty descent track..good luck with it!

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