hello TA's !!
long time since i posted here.
my new tune, would like to share it with you guys.
its progressive melodic, i hope u guys enjoy it.
reviews and constructive critism much appreciated.
cya around.



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let me see I think the kick doesn't have to kick so hard...it's a bit loud I think...
the bassline which starts first would go well with some delay on it's top end.
the incoming melody sounds promising!
I would add some kind of sub-bassbasline...now you have kick (empty space) mid sounding bassline...

the breakdown is nice...like...perfect blend
I like the melodies...one more thing ... the hats...are not loud enough

overall a good job on melodies and some of the sounds and average job on the mixdown... :-/
some sounds are misbalanced :-/

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Originally posted by BOOsTER let me see I think the kick doesn't have to kick so hard...it's a bit loud I think... the bassline which starts first would go well with some delay on it's top end. the incoming melody sounds promising! I would add some kind of sub-bassbasline...now you have kick (empty space) mid sounding bassline... the breakdown is nice...like...perfect blend I like the melodies...one more thing ... the hats...are not loud enough overall a good job on melodies and some of the sounds and average job on the mixdown... :-/ some sounds are misbalanced :-/

Thanks for ur kind words dude, helped me a lot

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mmmk just dloaded it... one sec...

ok cool beginning..

personally the kick sounds matched decently to the bass although the bass isnt bassy enough in my opinion.. remember in a club with limiters n shit set up youre just gona haer and feel mostly the bassline and kick so they should be equal..

cool fx usage/pad work its very melodic.. the more verbage you use in general the thicker the sounds will be. if you increased the attack and release of the strings pad i think you might get a better pad like string sound.. interesting melody coming in very retro-airscape-esque and producers of the happy trance genre era. i like it, but currently a more modern sound is popular by the masses.. i like it though annnyways...

when you bring in the pads and such after the break with the kick its interesting.. but try subbing the kick for hhats and bring them in with automation.. itll develop more energy - somethign this track is kind of lacking at times.

clap is slightly lower - bring it up a few clicks same with highhats..

very good workable piece dude

good stuff cya laterrr
check out my new track i just posted if u have time thanks

thanks for the review askspence68.
Glad u enjoyed it.

Any more reviews ?

hey there..

yes, kick seems too loud...i think clap is too loud also, everytime the clap comes on, the kick goes away...

nice leads, but I don't get the structure of the melody...seems like it's missing something...i feel like there should be another main lead...

good job though...

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Originally posted by marcusk hey there.. yes, kick seems too loud...i think clap is too loud also, everytime the clap comes on, the kick goes away... nice leads, but I don't get the structure of the melody...seems like it's missing something...i feel like there should be another main lead... good job though...

I'll see what i can do with the melody brother, thanks for the review