Hey there.
I dont really see your problem here. I really like the beginning, nice drums nice bassline nice effects. I takes quite a while till something new comes in, but thats fine in that case (dont ask me why lol)
The Mello kinda sux (sorry) but i d definetely go for a more powerful and more present sound with way more release or more reverb / delay.
Break is fine - but then it kinda stopps lol.
Just continoue and keep it uplifting like it started (my suggestion)
Have a nice one
Ciao Phil

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I can not understand what you mean neither, I like it! It has a nice atmoshere and the beggining is very driving. I hope to hear more of it!

Akia

Great drums with the percussion driving the beat. The snare is pretty sweet too.
Really cool atmosphere, lower the kick a bit, it's too prominent. The break is good too. Love that lead, you need to finish this...
P.S.
By the way, if the topic subject name was there for a reason of attracting attention, it worked for me.

Effero

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neah, this is for real...i think it's bad...don't know what the fuck happened but lately i think all my work sux...it may be the shit monitoring i'm using, or maybe the sequencer, don't know

thank you for your replys

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I can only judge as would i play it and so far yes i would.

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Online mixes here!!!

I have also thought that my productions sucks right after i've finnished them, but when i listen to them now i think the opposite. I'm sure you will like this track later

I think it sounds good, very good percussions and alot of atmosphere.
Melodies are very nice, i like the break alot

Try to complete it, it's my advice

//Alexander

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It doesn't suck, I know what it is. You're trying to get a certain sound and it just isn't working. I know the feeling. Then all of a sudden it just doesnt meet up to your standards. Just keep in mind you're trying to bring out the best in YOUR sound.

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