hey guys, i edited this track straight after my holidays with my new keyboard, im no pro but do my best to make nice songs. pls have a listen and tell me what you think feedback is returned!




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Thanks,

Bidor

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The melody is great! Maybe you could make the synth more soften and less computer sound. Anyway, I really like it. Keep it up!


Takere!

Akia

Oompah Oompah!

Not too bad. Those whitenoise effects in the beginning were pretty cool.

Percs sound kinda dry imo, kind of "un unique." Try eqing aspects of the hat or clap that you like, and give the different short reverbs to make them different sounding.

Piano is cheesy-tastic.

At least it sounds like you're paying attention to keys and chord progression. That is always a plus!

Try to avoid oompahs! I don't know. Your track has to be AMAZINGLY amazing for you to be able to pull of "oompah."

Keep up the work. It needs a lot of it.



Fun things to do with claps/hats/snares:

Make them 80's style baby!

Throw an old sounding reverb, kind of cheesy, and make it a "medium sized" reverb. I used the Kjaerhus classic reverb. Then add a gate to it. Make sure the gate has a longer release and is pretty wide.

I dunno. Just try different things to make your percs NOT sound like everyone elses. That's a big problem imo.



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thanks akia & djfreaq!

ill take the comments into consideration for my next songs. imo ive already spent to much time on this track.

Bidor

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any more comments fellow producers?

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