hey,

I've make a new track 3 months ago and I think that it's ok now.
Id' like to have your opinions on it.
It's really a nice uplifting melody with a strong kick drum.
HERE IS THE LINK
Waiting for your reviews :-)

Klems

Listening now...I think the bassline could use some delay. The break is becoming a little long right now without any added instruments. The bass is sounding a little more full right now during the break.

I don't really like the break all that much, but a cool melody. The climax is a little overdone. It's starting to get a little boring. Add more substance and I think it's a great track. A little more work, but great nonetheless.

Thanks for the review Lindo.
I have playing this track on my gigs and the bass sound ok.
I understand what you said about the break but It's so epic!
I will try to had perhaps another spacy sound
Thanks again

Hey Klems, nice to see something new of yours here

Very nice sound overall, sounds very professional.

I think that you could work some more with the break, it's getting booring after a while, try add some cool sounds and effects in the background or something.. Why not try adding the vocalsynth that is towards the end?

Ohh, I love this! I love when the melody is coming together with the kick like that @2:25, sounds very good!

Melody is good but it's getting abit unintresting after a while tho, just what i think tho...

I think this is a really proffesional track, it has nice sounds and it has potential

Keep it up!

//Alexander

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Hey,
Thanks spectra for this nice review.
I know that the break is "strange",I would say I was wanted to create a really planing one that really cut the track and grow up with the filtered bass.
But yes some fx/pad sound can be a good idea.
Thanks again spectra... and you know what I'm thinking about your work... still playing your "Zeitmahl Dont Be Afraid " remix

liked your stuff with rich so i had to take a listen to this!

first of very clean sound. lovely bass at the beginning.

breakdown has really nice pads but need more melody as someone mentioned or some efx to carry it along. wow that melody is really nice that comes in with the kick. sounds quite 'universial nation'.
again get some more effects or percussion to keep it flowing.

other than that great listen. loved that melody.

nice job on this!

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