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interesting intro. i like it.
sounds quite industrial. this sounds great actually i think a more upront sound could be had from a better mix. bring all the parts up a bit. like your chord synth and your percs. kick is fine. nice and clean.
the main 'intergalactic' vox needs a better introduction into the track. in fact i would not introduce it until after the main human vocal like you have done.
i think the vocals need to be cut down a bit. they make the track a bit cheesy. i would find the best lines and intermittedly drop them here and there.
omg! the main break is great! this is perfect. breakbeat is a bit standard. i would drop it and use some of your other subtle percs.
i would concentrate on a track built around that fantastic break. go purely dub on the main sections. building into that break(for abbout 2-3 mins). drop the vocals totally imo. dont use the intergalactic vocal accept within the break. i think you could make a really sophisticated remake using what you have made here.
great potential matey
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