Ok so this was made in 4 hours tonight (its 6am here), i was working on a track and got bored of it so i began messing around with a beat and a midi file and 4 hours later this is the end result.

Its a bootleg (only had one midi file all sounds are mine), its unmastered and some levels may need fine tuning and some parts need to be moved around but the structure is basiclly there, i may add an intro and some vox.

Made it 96Kbps so its faster to grab.

Please Please share your thoughts with me. Thanks.

had my way - not in love

hey adrian

i think the beginning is a bit dry...you should at least start with some low amp cl-hats...
i think one note of the saw sound is out of key...one of the lowest ones...
pad sound is nice, but could need some variation in freqs or some flange or so...always a goodie to have such an effect over such a long playing time of a pad...
the kick roll around 3.45 totally disturbs the sound...never heard something like this before...
mainsynth is nice...with some more eq, it could sound more powerful...but you said you didnt master it, so it's ok...
later on it sounds more powerful...

to the track itself: definatey needs a bunch more elements...submellows, percs, fx, tiny bleeps and blings...
the track has to less elements for nearly 12 mins, so the listener gets bored...
also the mixing/mastering needs some work as you already said...

good luck with reworking...

// Lars

Thanks for the feedback, plenty to look out for whcih is what i need as a relative begineer to production.

Still love that blank and jones thing, superb work. Im blown away.