That lead sound sounds like something from tetris or a video game i don't like the constant buildup changes..they kinda throw you off after a while and it gets really repetitive after that.

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Originally posted by Final Call That lead sound sounds like something from tetris or a video game i don't like the constant buildup changes..they kinda throw you off after a while and it gets really repetitive after that.

LOL, I was expecting all kinds of feedback, however that Tetris comment caught me with my pants down so to speak . That lead was supposed to be like someone is playing some strings in a low tone just before the climax.

I don't see how you get that idea, I made this track with an image in mind of several artists playing together in a band like form, you can feel it at the first climax, I in no way had in mind an intention to making this an Electronica track, I am sorry that was your impression of it.

About the repetitive build up comment, well this is trance things are supposed to be repetitive, this isn't an orchestra you know

Thanks for the feedback anyways

DJ BERKAT

not all things in trance are repetitive..i just didn't see the tune going anywhere..thats just my 2 cents.

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Originally posted by Final Call not all things in trance are repetitive..i just didn't see the tune going anywhere..thats just my 2 cents.

Point noted , thank you.

DJ BERKAT

Hey,
Listening, nice idea for the lead, but it's pretty empty&simple the tune itself, the drums build up is to predectible plus you really abuse pf that snare roll in my opinion, the synth selection is abit amateur too, the mix down is weak, I would use a better kick, stronger and better compressed, I would try to use more background drums too to boost a bit the drum section, I only hear an open hat, kick, a really weak clap and the snare.
In overall, you have nice ideas but this needs work, first try to add more background drums, the drums area is very basic, try to play more with the kick, variations so you dont have to use that snare roll that many times, the mixdown needs to be imrpoved, also play with the panoramics, all sounds to in the center, in overall, nice ideas but this is a bit amateur, NOTE, this is constructive feedback, dont tale me wrong and get pissed off .
Kopi =O.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Hey, Listening, nice idea for the lead, but it's pretty empty&simple the tune itself, the drums build up is to predectible plus you really abuse pf that snare roll in my opinion, the synth selection is abit amateur too, the mix down is weak, I would use a better kick, stronger and better compressed, I would try to use more background drums too to boost a bit the drum section, I only hear an open hat, kick, a really weak clap and the snare. In overall, you have nice ideas but this needs work, first try to add more background drums, the drums area is very basic, try to play more with the kick, variations so you dont have to use that snare roll that many times, the mixdown needs to be imrpoved, also play with the panoramics, all sounds to in the center, in overall, nice ideas but this is a bit amateur, NOTE, this is constructive feedback, dont tale me wrong and get pissed off . Kopi =O.

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OK I admitt it, I was running out of ideas for the drums so I kept repeating things over and over, I guess it's one of those things I
still need to work at furhter.

Thanks for your feedback, it's much appreciated..... HOWEVER that doesn't change the fact that I am still pissed off at you







DJ BERKAT

Good atmosphere, but it lacks focus and production quality. Nice ideas though! I agree with most of what Kopi said regarding the panning, percussion, kick etc.

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