The beat sounds a bit like it was from a Fred-Baker-production. Thatīs not bad at all, I like the Baker-sounds. Maybe a bit more pressure on the drum would help.
The start of the melody at 1:46 is nice, I enjoy this one. But the beat starts to getting boring. Some difference should be in it.
But the "Reservoir Dogs"-sample at the breakdown is sweet. Same for the piano-part. But at the beginning of the breakdown I would let the melody stop too for a moment.
The build-up is a kick to simple for me. It just comes too fast.
The FX you use are nice so far, maybe you could use some more.
At all, for a first version, I liked it.
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Sep-17-2006 17:31
in_dreams
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Mora, Sweden
Should take a look at it and make the changes.
//Micke
Sep-17-2006 18:41
U-Worm
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Cottbus
Damn, I am stupid.
I wrote an review to your older version.
OK, so here for the 2006-version.
Yep, this is more nice. Wonderful beat. I love it. The two baselines sound mint. This is, what I wanted to hear.
At the beginning of the breakdown I would put a crash or something. It ends to abrupt.
The new melody sounds like Armin or Tiësto-style.
Wow, the part in the middle after your breakdown rocks. Definately pushing. LOVELY!!!
The whole part followings really got me going nuts. MORE MORE MORE!
And yes, some more FX and this tune is finished.
Would love to hear the final version, when itīs finished.
Really fucking nice, Micke.
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Sep-17-2006 18:56
in_dreams
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Mora, Sweden
Ok. The old version sucks. I made this in the beginning of using Fruity Loops.
I should finnish this soon (I hope)
Thanx for the for the reply.
