Ok, I appologize for no Direct Link, but this is the best I can do..
Everybody has AG anyway, and if they dont, they should...

But I need constructive criticism.. cant anybody help?

not bad that tune, but it sounds 2 flp.....

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Well I think it's great!
Very well put together, but I get some distortion when the melody kicks in with alle the other elements. You should adjust some levels I think. Did you use only fruityloops. In that case, you've gotten alot out of that software.

Keep it up!

got this from you a few weeks ago...

i must saaay...i like the original better, but you did a pretty good job....your mix looses the great sounding powerful synth, although i do like the buildup.

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

Thanx, yeah I know what you mean with the synth sound... I didnt use any samples from the song itself, had to do it all by ear...

And yeah, I did do just about al of it in fruity, until I can learn to use my Reason software properly, I'm stuck with using it...

Thanx for the comments so far, much appreciated!

I just downloaded it.

The original is an amazing tune, and would be extremily hard to remix, and for you to do so by ear, i think you have talent.

I think you have done a great job remixing, but i dont think anyone could remix a better one than the original. What you have done is great, and i dont think there are many ppl on here who could have done a better remix.

Things i dont like :

1. The kick, sounds to amatuer if you know what i mean...?
2. The Tempo, I think its a bit fast for this type of track.

But well done and good luck with future productions

Hello there,

I thought that we would have time to finish the original mix before remixes, but anyway from your mix...

Liked the idea a lot.....especially the buildup.....sounds needs a bit polishing....but like somebody said earlier.....U got the talent!!! Maybe U just should get better tools.....vst or something Go kazaa some!

I´ve noticed that there are also other bands called "Shifter", how could they do something like that We brobaly have to do something about the name. BTW Shifter is from Finland and song title is finnish word biisi=song, piece....so chill out dudes....we are heading to studio next week to finish what we started.....planned to freak out there about 6 weeks mixing couple of older(including biisi1&biisi2) and few new songs(we gonna also name all our work)...so stay tuned....there is more to come!!!

-Collab-

P.S. Maybe U could do another version after we mix the final cut?!?

hehe, oh trust me i'd like the better tools, and in time I WILL have em.. I actually have vst, I just have to learn how to use it...
I'm honoured that you liked my mix, maybe I will try another go at it after it's done...

Btw, you rock! Biisi (original) is sooooooo popular amongst the tranceaddicts! It's one of my favourite tunes of all time right now! I can't wait to hear more of 'shifter's' tunes...

hell yeah! Shifter rules!

Biisi 1 is by far the best, man, that track is on FIRE! Been playin it since you first posted it way back when.

You could name it Isiib...heheheheheheheheh...

hey, you know, if Shifter is already taken as a name, you can always mispell it and call yourselfs "Shifta".

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

Thanks Davinox,

We think about "Shifta".......same thing seems to happend all the time....doesn´t matter how twisted name it is.....it´s already tooken! But there is thing to do among others...

I´m gonna post name for "Shifter-biisi1" ,"Shifter-biisi2" is called "Odd Physics".

-Collab-

"Odd Physics".... I like it!!!

Can't wait to hear what Biisi1 will be called.

I am listening to Odd Physics right now, hey, this track is good too!

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.