and here is the clip with the lead part. I really need to hear from you guys what you think? shuld I use more of my melodic side? or shuld It be plain like this?
Driving with a nice kick and bass, I like the melody too and I have said it before but I will say it again: You have a really nice voice!
But the lyric don´t impress me mutch (sorry neighbour!). Anyway, a good job!
Takere!
Akia
Sep-01-2006 17:53
Ryarni
In from the cold
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Sheffield, UK
Wow, really good, your voice is actually the hook rather than the melody, brilliant stuff!
yeah. Akia: The lyrics on the vocal is just a test. I will have something more deep, and more understandable. Like a tekst with a meaning! if you see. And thanks for thinking my voice is nice, neighbour!
Ryarni: what you meean by "hook"? really wanted to buy this?
djx2: thanks! Soo cool you guys think the vocal is nice. but the lyric will be something else though!
Thanks! More reviews are very welcome
Sep-03-2006 19:31
d-jay MyTH
Dont like my name anymore
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Farnborough. Hampshire
I think you are definitely one to watch and I predict big things for you. There is a certain unique stamp you put on all your tracks and I'm always excited when I see your name pop up on this forum.
Keep on at it - you have very interesting production and you are a raw talent.
this really isnt much of my style at all nowadays but i gave it a go ahead. here is my take on it.
from the get -go i am prejudiced against male vocals trance. with the exception of the chicane - bryan adams collabarations i think that male vocals in trance walks a thin line on sounding really gay. that said...
youre lyrics could use some meaning. your voice is way better than mine (thus i am not a singer) so you should be taking advantage of that. honestly the vocal did not "hook" me it sounded a bit generic, rather the guitar i found to be a nice touch. Did you play that or use a sample? if you are a guitarist i think you should continue to use the guitar in your productions. I may try to add some guitar into some of mine tho its a bit harder to fit it in with the dirty, techy groove i am doing nowadays.
looks like you've got a humble fan-club here to support you so keep it up you can only get better!
Oct-04-2006 07:06
Rayan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo
woow! Thought this thread was dead for months ago :P hehe
d-jay MyTH:
quote:
I think you are definitely one to watch and I predict big things for you.
thanks you soo much. That one will I remember
Sunclyder:
thanks for review nice to hear!
Lightside:
I can not please all around me. hehe! well, its my first try with me singing in a trance song. And the lyrics is like I have said on a other review not the right lyrics. its just there to get a soundpicture of what it will be when its done. So, the lyrics will be "pimped" alot. trust me! doing some text writing right now
Yeah. I play guitar, I think I have a "guitar thingy" in every song I make. hehe!
but, thanks for the review! its the best one I have got for a looong time. Like the honest ones!
Ryan
Oct-04-2006 08:45
KAKAAKlol
deadmau5-sucks
Registered: Aug 2005
Location: Space
the lead sample i really liked!
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Oct-04-2006 12:46
No_Boundaries
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Panamá
Nice song,
what I like the most was the downtempo with the entrance of the vocals and guitar.
Ryan - Star (Vocal trancer) Upgrade: now with the take off lead part!
