I downloaded the first song and gotta say that u got the talent, excellent stuff. This song really has potential so I would like to give you a bit deeper analysis:
First about the build-up. The melody already starts in 0.27, It's a bit too early if you think dj:s to mix this but anyway the melodies are really good in first strophe. Goldenscan - Sunrise came my mind when I listened first 2 mins , not that it sounds same but the feeling is simiral. Anyway first two mins truly rocks, splendid !
Then break part:
Strings/stringpads in 2.16 are amazing, sounds like made with real synths so Im assuming that u have some hardware gear too. Only thing that could be made better is the synth that starts to "flood" in. Melody is ok but not perfect, needs a bit polishing. In 2.42 that higher played synth needs to be smoother, I didnt like it very much.
maybe it could use some more reverb and delay also but anyway the sound is too harsh now. Overall the break part is well done, needs just few improvements.
The arrangement is flawless and melodies good but only thing that alway disturbs me is that "highnote" synth. I really think that you could get a record deal if you make some changes and then send a demo somewhere, just Fintastic job 
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