Hello TA
UPDATE!!!!!! VOCALS FIXED... Please, tell me its a bit better :P

First of all, this whole tune is made with a set of headphones. so it could turn out the be "UGLY sounding and stuff like that". but, I post it. wil master it when I`m back home to my apartement.

What to say. someone heard about jetro tul? VNV nation? apoptygma berzerk?

if so, I try some of their ways of make music. Like the vocals are inspired from jetro tul, and some more stuff are inspired from VNV nation, like the way I sing. The lyrics are inspired by apoptygma!

So, I though. this could be very cool! its more like a chill, trance. and the vocals fit like they are out of beat, but thats just the way it have to be! to make it more "smooth" and get it to be more like my own way to do it.

The lyrics got (believe it or not) a meaning. Well, depends on who hear it though. people could understand if different.

Well. like all of my tunes, I try new ways of making a trancer. so this is also a test tune! hehe.

LYRIC:
places to places, you dont know what you are looking for.
you try to find the only way, to hide the fear away.

you are going thrue changes, that will guid you to places.
a place where you will find, your own

You have been suffering, pain from someone else.
that you nearly live your life, the way you want.

time to time, and you still dont know what your doing here.
You still dont know what your waiting for.
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Ryan - Changes VOCAL FIX <---
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Thanks.

Ryan.

and one more thing. I just have to show you my microfilter HEPA-filter :P its VERY home made. and I think it looks so funny! its my littlebrother`s teddy bear:P you take what you got.
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Last edited by Rayan on Oct-05-2006 at 23:03

I dont like the vocals but i really like the tune... The strings make it sound epic!

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Cool intro, A litle to much on the highs on that sweeping thing.

Nice gate on vocals, very alienish haha.
But ryan I dont feel any rythm in the percs. might be cool with some tribals. and the kick seems to be to much in the mid range, might wana add some lows.

Great pad work!
Im waiting for the vocals.

hmm the vocals cannot be understod, I dont know if its a bad mic or you want it that way but somethings not right with the vocals, very A "forest" on that guys voice =). I think youve done better tracks this sound very empty. But with your talent you can fix this in a few hours.

overall Its ok, nothing that is stuck im my head.

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Listening to the track now,

What's with the vocals? I dont know if its just me but the vocals seems that you went way out with the verb, exactly what the previous review said that it can´t be understood but is because of the verb (imho). The track is ok, I usually listen to tracks @ work so cant comment on quality but I hear everything good so far. It's just the vocals that needs more work.

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hm :P Will do something with those vocals :P , But it`s something like that I want it! argh. not easy !!! haha

I like the empty atmosphere and the dark melody! But have to agree with the others about the vocal, it needs more work .

(Cute microfilter!)



Takere!

Akia

To the ones who heave reviewed! Check out the update where I have fixed vocals, lower-end kick & some more.

I wrote a full review on this one but it didn't post it...
sorry man lol

Omer

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bhaaa! :/ do it again! hehe.. or find it!

The vocals are mutch better! Not perfectly clear but I guess you don´t wont that..? Really like this track!


Akia