just listened to your tune.. it has big potential to become a trancer. its nice chillout and needs some more work.. try and make a trance version of this tune. looking forward to hear it!
Beginning: In my opinion the starting seconds of the track with the intro itself deserve a more grander entrance and the synth sounds a bit too high and loud in my opinion, could use a tad bit of mild reverb.
0:38; Really diggin' the bassline you got going here
0:59; I dont know about the kick, something just doesn't click for me here. Sounds a bit to punchy and could huge a bit more fattening up for the environment of this track. I like that snare though, fits well.
1:58; Pretty cool percs but they seem to be a bit too high-ended and "shiny" if you know what I mean. Should be a toned down a bit and you could add a bit of reverb to it and lower the highs to liven up the track and make it a bit more "full".
One thing I was really waiting for was a fat padded bassline to add some depth and some more percussion. Track really seemed like it deserved a lot more attention and for all that to build up into this really cool break-beat with some complex percussion patterns.
-Cheers
Oct-06-2006 13:45
Akia
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Stockholm
Just LOVE the melody, the atmosphere, the feeling! But I think some sounds could be a bit warmer. However, you have to keep this one up!
Takere!
Akia
Oct-06-2006 19:22
Snowave
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Stockholm
Akia. Thx for the comment.
jupiterone: Thanx. well the is that this chill out was never to heavy. just soft mayby even little bitt 80īs inspired even.But I will think about.
Bidor: thanx for comment m8. Will think about. Could be gr8 as trance track also.
Snowave new track. (Chill beat)
