Really nice intro!!! Right after the breakdown I can"t hear clearly the kick! it is like getting dissapeared... the melody seems a little epic and i liked that! But try to fix that thing with the kick!

Hey! Thanks for taking the time to check this out. Exactly where do you lose the kick? Do you mean when the main melody first comes in?

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nice sound structure very spacey. where did you get that vocal sample?

would put it in the psy/ experimental category rather than progressive.

after the breakdown your bassline disappears some eq should fix that though. as the previous poster said about the kick id add some mid tones to it maybe layer a mid kick should give it more presense and would give your track a bit more drive.

nice job though very spacey sounding.

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yes, right after the breakdown. i can only hear it in the background. i had problems like this and i'm trying to keep the kick playing mono so that i don't have any conflicts with the volumes of the other instruments.

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Originally posted by File_Corrupted yes, right after the breakdown. i can only hear it in the background. i had problems like this and i'm trying to keep the kick playing mono so that i don't have any conflicts with the volumes of the other instruments.

you should resize your footer or the mods will remove it.

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Hey kane! Thanks for taking the time to listen. I appreciate it. I'll see what i can do with the bass and the kick. Putting a monoizer on the kick channel should help a little bit, then some eq should do the rest i think. We'll see. Anyways, thanks for listening guys.

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yay, how you doing mate? reviewing while im listening...
nice clear kick and spacy pad sound cool.
vocal is nice + the synth at 0:17.
i like the snairfill at 0:43 and the synth at 1:10
this track is fucking cool man got goosebumps allover
1:56 suddenly the volume of the bassline lowers quite a bit.. try and change that. from 2:00 till 4:54 the main melody is playing.. sounds nice but maybe try and and a little breakdown in between and then drop the main melody again... cool outro love the spacy background pads...


Nice tune mate

Bidor.

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Thanks for listening. I've got to do something about that bass. This was mixed almost entirely on headphones because i haven't been in my room to hear it on speakers yet. Once i get there i can fix it. I was trying to think of a small something to add to change up that section a little bit. I'll come up with something later. Been working too long right now. Anyways, thanks again.

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Originally posted by Enigmatic XTC Thanks for listening. I've got to do something about that bass. This was mixed almost entirely on headphones because i haven't been in my room to hear it on speakers yet. Once i get there i can fix it. I was trying to think of a small something to add to change up that section a little bit. I'll come up with something later. Been working too long right now. Anyways, thanks again.

dont forget to make a breakdown in the between the times i mentioned.. i think maybe a second bassline in the breakdown would sound cool! im looking forward to the new version. keep it up.

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Thats a good idea. I'll try that out. Thanks.

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Sounds cool! The vocals are great! Like the melody too, atmospheric! Nice job!


Takere!

Akia