Ok i was bored last week and started this can't finish it for 2 weeks as i'm away on work.

The vocal needs to be time-stretched to fit and tweaked to fit the rest of the track yet but i'm liking it so far.

Your comments are welcome

http://krisforbes.co.uk/satelite_remix.mp3

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I like this, quite darkish sounding.

Lose the vocal, it really doesnt work, and its way out of time.

Work on your kick, it needs a tighter thud, the bass sounds quite nice but its overcrowded with that vocal.

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Thanks for the comments gives me a few things to think about

ie if i did remove the vocal i'd actually need to make a break (dun dun duuuunnnnn) and how it would go

Thanks again glad your liking it so far

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vocals well out of time, sounds gash

needs work on percussion, get a subtle loop or summit.