Sounds good! Really nice atmosphere! But I think something is missing, its a bit empty, maybe the piano will complete it... Keep it up!

Akia

nice track...good atmoshere....good warmup stuff....go down well at the begining of a set...nice work.....review my tune lonley people by covert23 thanks....keep it up...

hey mate

nice kick. really deep and warm and bass is beautiful.

synth choice is also original and pleasing to the ears. the sound is a bit warmer than your usual style of master. its better imo.

percs are reletively standard but do the job nicely. the track is very rolling.

break - nice build down. real good. synths are great! i like the violin sound. and sweepy sounds. this makes me think im in an enchanted forest. bass coming back... working well.

beat is back - great lows.. real awsome sound. and minimal which is good. percs are introduced well. bassline is showing more. i can hear some mids on your bass i think.. they sound like they have been filtered out.. id allow them to shine through every now and then.. it sounds like they want to

overala this is your most technically great piece. warm clear sound and nice sound throughout.

good to see one of my fave producers here doing a real good job as usual matey.

rich - ps. a piano will work wonders for this.. chordy ones me thinks!

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Thanks for the comments, glad you all like it.

I have updated the track (see first post)

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Listening, pitty myspace player has really bad quality so I will try to avoid any mixdown comments, I like the feedback synth you use, it boost the athmosphere alot, the bass is not my cup of tea, I would use a deeper one though, main drums are fine, but I would try adding some background fx loops or only background drum loops to enchance the overeall drum sound.
Break is good, nice pads, they have good personalitie, I would use a sledege guitar for the breka instead the piano, but again it's only personal taste.
In overall, this is going pretty nice, athmospheres are really good, looking forward to the final version.
Kopi =o.

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Cheers Kopi!
Some more, probably small delayed drums and effects are on the way. I know it needs alot more in the background.
I'm trying out one more melodyline too, but i dont think it's gonna be a guitar tho...

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I really the intro, kinda funky with that bass. Great vibe when that it gets going. Is that sidechaining on the bassline? Sounds cool anyways.

The break in the middle is a bit sudden and unprepared, I think it could be made a bit smoother, like for example applying filtering to the percussion and kick to make it fade out.

Awesome track mate, sounds great

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[myspace suck factor in place] nice kick. bass is real tight. nice pluck arp. good swishy feel to the track. a little bleepy and beepy at 2:10. that probably could improve. the percs are very good. i like the first break a lot! the way you handle rhythm and transition there is very good. ahhhhh this is more like it! great break. why not forget all the other crap and do this! i like the piano. i think you should go with it and replace the melody at 4:00 with the same melody but played with like a wooden flute soundfont. trip it out. the beat coming back in is very tight! very good song.
thanks for sharing!

btw you are very young and very white lol

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Originally posted by Majutsu btw you are very young and very white lol

Yea, I'm 19 years old, and it's been the winter up here
Thanks for a great review, good idea about the flute, gonna try it.
Sorry for the myspace player, gonna fix a sample here soon.

Drik: Glad you like it, The mixing is very rough atm.
I'm not using any sidechaining, i've just played with the attack.

Thanks!

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Hey,

commenting as I listen...

you did a very good job on the percussion. There are many sounds grooving well together.
Cool introduction of the bass, which feels a little sluggish then. But it kinda fits the overall tone.
1:30 is great. Awesome percussion and nice ambience everywhere. At this point the tune is really "full". Great.
Still a good atmosphere. Judging just from the low quality online stream, the kick is solid, but could do with a little less oomph.
Now at the breakdown... still great atmosphere. And what a nice piano! Feels really distant and wide, yet it doesnt seem to get muddy. Great!
5:00 seems really good. The elements are perfectly balanced. Maybe the piano part could last longer, I really dig it!
Overall, a nice laid back with a great overall sound. There is nothing I could really criticize. Great job

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