hi again,

uploaded a new track yesterday, but now im here again with another one i made some days ago =)

i didn't thauht it was good enough to be added in here, but some gave me the advice that i should do it anyway..

so here it is:
(4:42 - 160kbps)

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i have uploaded a new version of the tune now.. maked some small changes. check it out! =)

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hope ill get some feedback.. feedback is the best part in a song process, from feedback we learn.. right? ;-)

-Anbech

[EDIT] ups, totally forgot to tell, that its a bit dark, alot of effects.. and a good melody.. =)

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Last edited by DJAnbech on Nov-16-2006 at 22:08

hey mate, this is better then the "Zombie Nation Remix" still needs more work though. i like the effects in the beginning and the kick is clear.
0:52 no no try and introduce it better. it comes in all of sudden including that snairfill. you got the reverb on the synths much better then the last tune. the song has all it needs, enough effects etc. the problem it has is the structure (buildup of the tune). try and introduce the main leads in a different way. they came in all of sudden. it has potential just try and get the structure right. keep up the good work!

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Originally posted by Bidor hey mate, this is better then the "Zombie Nation Remix" still needs more work though. i like the effects in the beginning and the kick is clear. 0:52 no no try and introduce it better. it comes in all of sudden including that snairfill. you got the reverb on the synths much better then the last tune. the song has all it needs, enough effects etc. the problem it has is the structure (buildup of the tune). try and introduce the main leads in a different way. they came in all of sudden. it has potential just try and get the structure right. keep up the good work!

thx for reply bidor! =)

you read my minds.. or not exactly, but i could sense that something was wrong.. it could sound like its that main riff introduction that spoils it.. thx! looking at it and will update as soon i have done something about it..

-Anbech

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