listening...Pretty nice start. Kind of a typical bassline but its pretty deep which is good. Interesting leads. Your percs need to be expanded on. I only hear one hat as of the break. Nice break. U should transition the bass a little better in the break...bring it in more subtly. The crash is a little bit weak imo.

Pros...good leads and kick. Nice melody line and song structure.

Cons. Need to work on your percussion. The song never really takes off like i expected it to. Try to add variation w/the bass. The same ow ow ow ow tends to get a little redundant.

Good job though dude. Welcome to TA.

Andy

ps if you get a chance you should review my newest song here:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...2&forumid=74&s=

Thanks for your welcome and constructive feedback :-)

About your track, I get a 'The page you requested cannot be found' error...

Dj Indigo

hmm...its on the first page of the forum. Andy french vs. jerusalem of gold.
take it easy
andy

really nice, great melody i especially like the part at 3:20

I'm glad you liked it. Thank for your listening

nice track u have here dude !

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glad you like it DJ KaRiM :-)

Well Done, I really liked it, good stuff, I loved the bass line and the synths. Not a negative comment but eventhough it had a lot of new things coming up throughout the 7 minutes, I just felt it was a tiny bit recursive, maybe the tempo should have changed considerably as you go through the track, but that's just my opinion others might disagree.

Good track, keep it up!

Would appreciate it if you checked out my latest work
and gave me some feedback too

DJ BERKAT

Thanks for your review.
I'll check you track right away :-)