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First........
those vocals have nothing to do in that song, they directly ruin it really bad. God whyd u guys put em in there? yiiiikes........
The song has good although standard buildups, i like the percussion and groove in it very much.
The bass however is way too dry. Try adding echo/reverb here, might help. And the sound generally sounds way too "fruity"........i dunno if u use fruity or not, but it has that general sound almost all fruity users have a problem getting rid off.
Now the melody, is good but isnt exactly the big anthem, could use some catchiness. It doesnt really stay in your mind like many other tunes... Nothing much to do here than keep writing...
Although good work, here, a good song with structure, good to see that some people know what they are doing, now its just taking it the next step.
Good work keep it up guys.
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