http://download.yousendit.com/F70729D318FDF53D

The first reasonable product of my foray into a new genre, it has gotten some good responses from friends....but they're my friends.

I could probably record myself using the bathroom and put some percs on top and they'd call it awesome.

Don't be afraid to be brutal, thats what helps the most in improving I've found .

Also, wtf genre is it?

I've narrowed it down to some sort of progressive but I really have no clue

Thanks in advance.

Hey,
First off, it seems like ur missing some drive to it, ur kick sounds pretty empty from what im hearing, the release on it is too short. Second, seemed a bit slow for my likings, but that may be my personal opinion. Thats all i could really gather from a quick listen.

Cheers
Matt Keyes